Charting Through Conflict

by Hallee Bridgeman, @halleeb

Happily writing away on my latest WIP, I came across a major road block. I knew what I wanted my conflict to be. I just didn’t know why it should be a conflict for my main character. Or, rather, I didn’t know how to make it a big enough conflict that the reader would understand why it was a big deal to my character.

I’d plotted out the book – a brief outline of what happened in each chapter, and had written about three chapters of the planned ten (this book is a 40K word novella.) However, this outline is just action presented as an answer to the question, “What happens in this chapter?” Most of the time, the characterization and conflicts and goals are already built in a solid form as I’ve built my characters. When writing this one, though, the conflict was just this vague conflict hanging out there that made sense to me in my mind because I knew the “whole” story versus what was being presented on the page — but in writing all of that down, I just found myself up against the wall that lead to the deepening of the conflict. For the first time ever, I was stuck — while writing my 24th book!

So, I took out a white board and a red dry erase marker and wrote the conflict in the center of it and drew a big circle around it. There was my conflict – in red and white.

I asked the question, “Why did it matter to her?” I wrote the answer, circled it, and drew a line to the conflict.

I asked the question, “Why did it matter to him?” I wrote the answer and circled it and drew a line back to the conflict.

Okay, so I had how the conflict affected my two main characters. Next, I asked for both answers, “What will it mean if —,” which produced two or three answers to that question as it pertained to each characters.

Working backward from the center, in an organizational chart format, I answered questions that directly related to conflict, character action and reaction, and motivations. The end result was that I had my conflict built in a way that I could present it on the page and make it matter to my readers — give them a conflict in which they could relate and root for the parties to overcome.

Suddenly, the wall I’d come across dissolved and I was able to go forward with the book. I didn’t even have to refer back to the organizational chart I’d developed. I think what I had to do was problem solve it in a concrete way that allowed me to see it. Which, in turn, further developed my characters in my mind and gave me the freedom to continue with the story as I’d originally plotted it.

Sometimes, it takes stepping away from the way “you’ve always done it before,” and creating a new way for your mind to work through a problem. What kind of creative solutions have you used to work through a plotting/writing problem?


Out of the Blue Bouquet

Five of today’s Best-selling Christian Authors weave five unique connected stories where misdirected floral deliveries lead to changed lives.

Courting Calla, by Hallee Bridgeman.
Ian knows Calla is the woman God has chosen for him, but Calla is hiding something big. Can Calla trust Ian with her secret, or will she let it destroy any possible hope they may have for a future?

Seoul in Love, by Alana Terry.
Love was lost a long time ago. A chance meeting in Seoul might change all that forever.

A Kærasti for Clari, by Carol Moncado.
Joel Christiansen delivered flowers to the palace and found his life turned upside down.
Clari Sørenson’s job as social media manager for Eyjania’s Queen Mother keeps her busy. An unexpected treasure hunt with a cute guy might be the vacation she needs.
Between clues and a snow storm, they’re drawn to each other. Her grandparents, and even the Queen Mother, have been after her to find a boyfriend, but is Joel the Kærasti for Clari?

Premeditated Serendipity, by Chautona Havig.
When Wayne Farrell hears about his niece’s floral fiasco, it sparks a plan to mix up his own orders in an attempt to play matchmaker. Reid has his reasons for not pursuing Kelsey… yet, and Wayne’s interference only makes an already difficult situation even more awkward. Premeditated Serendipity—because romance sometimes needs a little shove.

Out of the Blue Bouquet, by Amanda Tru.
When Brooke is left in charge of Crossroads Floral, she accidentally sends the flower deliveries to the wrong people. Unfortunately, some of those wrong people include all of the ex-girlfriends of the most eligible bachelor in town. Are Brooke’s mistakes a complete disaster, or can there be something beautiful in an out-of-the-blue bouquet?”

With more than half a million book sales, Hallee Bridgeman is a best-selling Christian author who writes action-packed romantic suspense focusing on realistic characters who face real world problems. Her work has been described as everything from refreshing to heart-stopping exciting and edgy.

An Army brat turned Floridian, Hallee finally settled in central Kentucky with her family so that she could enjoy the beautiful changing of the seasons. She enjoys the roller-coaster ride thrills that life with a National Guard husband, a college sophomore daughter, and two elementary aged sons delivers.

A prolific writer, when she’s not penning novels, you will find her in the kitchen, which she considers the ‘heart of the home’. Her passion for cooking spurred her to launch a whole food, real food “Parody” cookbook series. In addition to nutritious, Biblically grounded recipes, readers will find that each cookbook also confronts some controversial aspect of secular pop culture.

Hallee is a member of the Published Author Network (PAN) of the Romance Writers of America (RWA) where she serves as a long time board member in the Faith, Hope, & Love chapter. She is a member of the American Christian Fiction Writers (ACFW) and the American Christian Writers (ACW) as well as being a member of Novelists, Inc. (NINC).

Hallee loves coffee, campy action movies, and regular date nights with her husband. Above all else, she loves God with all of her heart, soul, mind, and strength; has been redeemed by the blood of Christ; and relies on the presence of the Holy Spirit to guide her. She prays her work here on earth is a blessing to you and would love to hear from you. You find Hallee on her blog at halleebridgeman.com.