The Difference A Word Makes

by Marcia Lee Laycock, @MarciaLaycock

As writers, we all know the importance of finding that perfect word. Sometimes it can take a while. I will often highlight a word I’m not completely satisfied with as I write, then come back to it and try to find exactly the word I’m looking for. Sometimes the perfect word eludes us. We know it’s out there, somewhere, hidden in that dictionary vault in our minds, but it just won’t reveal itself. If you’re like me, you’re doggedly persistent in finding thatperfect word. We know it can make the difference between a so-so sentence and one that has punch and power.

In a recent sermon, my husband challenged our congregation to replace one word with another. Both are common words, words we use all the time. One is a word that our culture prizes, the other is a word used in the Bible 114 times.

The first word is successful. We all know what it means, or we think we do. Success in the eyes of our North American culture means a big house in the right neighborhood, a fancy car with all the bells and whistles, well-adjusted children who never cause us a sleepless night, and of course, a “healthy” bank account. Success for a writer, according to all the ‘experts,’ is at least one title that makes it onto the New York Times’best seller’s list.

The second word is faithful. We all know what that means too, or think we do. It is often synonymous with loyalty. The world values faithfulness, to some degree, though in the corporate world an employer would usually sooner have someone bringing up their bottom line than showing up for work every day and simply doing his/her job. The lawyer bringing in top-paying clients is much more highly valued than the janitor who’s been cleaning his office for twenty years.

But let’s dissect that word, faithful. Faith. The bible tells us that word means “fix(ing) our eyes not on what is seen, but on what is unseen, since what is seen is temporary, but what is unseen is eternal” (2Corinthians 4:18).  Faith, then, means focussing on the King and His kingdom, not our own.

And then the small, but oh so important suffix, ful. To be full means complete. My thesaurus lists occupied, jam-packed and bursting as synonyms. Imagine what the world would be like if we were all occupied, jam-packed and bursting with faith in Jesus Christ.

Imagine an army of writers willing to replace the word successful with the word faithful. Imagine an army of writers who are truly faithful, writers who come to their computers every day with a heavenly perspective, focused on God’s kingdom, not the Amazon rankings. Imagine an army of writers that prays before a single word is typed.

Faithful. Yes, indeed, that word will make a difference.


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 One Smooth Stone

Desperate to escape his past, the police, and especially, God, Alex Donnelly picks a good place to hide – the Yukon wilderness – but he finds even there his is pursued. What will it take for him to discover that no matter how far you run, God will find you, and no matter what you have done, God will forgive you?

Marcia Lee Laycock writes from central Alberta Canada where she is a pastor’s wife and mother of three adult daughters. She was the winner of The Best New Canadian Christian Author Award for her novel, One Smooth Stone. The sequel, A Tumbled Stone was short listed in The Word Awards. Marcia also has four devotional books in print and has contributed to several anthologies. Her work has been endorsed by Sigmund Brouwer, Janette Oke, Phil Callaway and Mark Buchanan.